Week 8 Comments and Feedback

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The type of feedback I'm getting for the class is helpful. Some of the feedback I am getting for my project are actually ideas I already had for the stories and segmenants later on. I hope I am giving good feedback. I am just trying to be honest in my comments. I am pretty happy with my introduction post. I feel like it's very representative of me. I like seeing how people relate to me as well in some of those comments. I chose the picture below because I know that no one is meaning anything maliciously when they are giving me criticism. They just want me to imporce and they want to be entertained by my writing. 



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